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Something to fear by ~Sachi-Chan1200:iconSachi-Chan1200:



Sachi crept out of her room in the Mental Hospital. She warily peered around the corner, her heart pounding against her chest and her breath coming out in ragged puffs. She gulped and closed her eyes desparatly trying to remember the face she saw but her lack of sleep fogged her mind. Sachi shook her head feeling light headed, stars circled around her, or so what Sachi saw. She stumbled backwards and hit the wall falling into the sitting position. But oddly, Sachi wasn't tired. She felt wide awake and filled with energy...maybe from the pills the nurse made Sachi take, or the excitement and fear that pulsed through her weak body as she neared the last place she heard the horrible wispers and horrific faces that seemed to never go away. This used to drive Sachi to the point of insanity but now...she felt like she had to witness all this once more. After ten minutes of sitting, Sachi got up and took a deep breath. She then stepped from behind her corner and walked into the dark shadowed and deserted halls. Once more, her fears came rushing back and Sachi stopped. Why couldn't she go furthur? This was what she wanted but something was holding her back...a dark secret perhaps? Sachi sighed and kneeled to the floor, her face felt so hot but when she put her pale hand to her forehead...it was cold, colder than death itself. *Am I dead?* Sachi thought. Sachi opened her eyes to the sound of snapping..or something close. She looked around and the dim lights that were on were now..shutting off. Sachi stood up and watched as the blacking lights came closer, and faster. Sachi looked closer and she could hardly make out a figure coming towards her. Sachi dashed forward trying to escape the darkness that was gaining on her. Sachi ran faster, her weak body didn't seem to slow her down. Her heart pounding against her chest and her breath weakening. Sachi tripped on her hospital gown and fell to the floor. She closed her eyes waiting for the darkness to reach her but it didn't. All Sachi could feel was a hand on her shoulder shaking her and a voice speaking loudly. "Sachi! Sachi! Get up." It said. Sachi looked up and everything was a blurr. She couldn't make out who was around her but she could see a infamiliar figure standing alittle ways away. Sachi felt her head rush and everything went black once again.

To be continued...
©2009-2010 ~Sachi-Chan1200
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Author's Comments

Heh heh, I'm sorry, I was bored...

My fanfics are soooo boring but I mine aswell post this...horror(?) story I just made up ^^ I mean, I love to be afraid and fear and I love the thrill you get from watching a scary movie or reading scary story or even just actually going into a place that scares the hell out of you!

I had to spend the night in my Aunties HAUNTED house and I heard things...in some of my other chapters of this I will make Sachi encounter some things I have!

I'm not that good at writing stories but...I don't know, I guess I've been wanting to write something that could possibly freak people out! BUT I DON'T THINK IT WILL! D:

Ohwell...

Enjoy the fear >:D

Story Idea (c) Me
Sachi (c) Me

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:iconshy-hina-chan:
You have very creative and good ideas :3 Also, i love the way you make me go all "OH NOES D:" and then are all "To be continued" Hurry and right the rest D: PLEASE, i don't want to be all "WHAT NEXXXT" forever :3
:iconsachi-chan1200:
Lol, Thank you! :hug: Haha, omg I hate that when a story is so good and there's the "To be continued..." I'm all, "WHYYYYYYYYYYYY?" LOL! Yeah, I got the other written but I'm not sure it's good, I was tired while writing it ^^; I'll post it soon! Thanks again!

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:iconshy-hina-chan:
no problem :3 I may ask for help with, like, scary parts in my story or help in general :3 So yeah...You never know when i need an idea...
:iconsachi-chan1200:
Alright! I'd be happy to give ideas and help ^^

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:icongothicgirl143:
very good. I think it's wonderful. :hug:

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I just lost the game. I thought I'd announce it so you would lose the game as well.

Some call me a psycho, but in Wonderland, We're all mad. So it doesn't matter =D
:iconelricheiderichlover:
It seems scary enough (in a good way). =) Very nice! ^^

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~I believe in Jesus Christ as my savior. :heart:

~"Don't jump because death is NEVER worth the time and effort for you are still young and life is still calling out your name." ~ Anonymous :hug:
:iconelricheiderichlover:
You're welcome! :glomp: ^^

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~I believe in Jesus Christ as my savior. :heart:

~"Don't jump because death is NEVER worth the time and effort for you are still young and life is still calling out your name." ~ Anonymous :hug:

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